My Favourite Person
My Mum is very important to me because she pushes me to do my homework and she helps me do it whenever I am stuck on something. My Mum takes me and my family to the library. She wears a long nice skirt with shiny beautiful shirt. My Mum works she is lovely,smart,kind and helpful.
My Mum has a smooth long hair, her eyeball is brown.
I liked how you used good vocabulary and your mum pushes you to do well in school my mum pushes me to do well in school to. Next I think you could write more but apart from that I thought it was great
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